SCENE 1 :
SUN RISES.. ITS MORNING.. ondu stylish good HOUSE.. adralli TOP floor-alli, someone sleeping still with RUG on his face!
Ravi already EAST-alli RISE aagbiTTidda.. But nam RAVI innu BEDalli becchage gorke hoDithidda. Sudden-aagi Alarm hoDkoLLoke Shuru aaythu. It was 7am.
Ravi (BED-alli malkoNde..) aaaaay.. thu. Yaav kantri nan maga ee Alarm iTTiddu ee TIMEge. (anta OFF maaDthaane.)
Pakkadalle ninthidlu avana akka Rashmi: Ley.. Neene kaNo.. nenne raathri set maaDadyallo.
Ravi: aah! houdalwaaaa.. (mayyi muritaa yedda). Naanu 7amge alarm yaake iTTidde antaane jnaapka bartillwalle.
Rashmi: Ivattu Sunday kaNo ley. Nin favourite programgaLu saalu saalaagi 7am-inda TVli barathalla noDhogu.
Ravi : Oh shit.. ya ya.. (he runs to the living room)
Rashmi : Ravi hallujjo, coffee koDtheeni
Ravi : Ley nan favourite star Rakshu ivattu Yoga program naDeskoDthaaLe kaNe. adanna PRIVATEaagi noDi mugisadmele bartheeni. eega coffee-ge yenu urgentu dear sister…. bande iru…
Rashmi : ayyo shuruvaaythu. aa dummi yoga maaDadre ivangenu majaanopa.. ee huDagranna arthaane maadkoLLoke aagalla.
Ravi starts watching Rakshu on TV doing yoga. Full enjoy maaDthirthaane. Madhyadalle phone baratthe.
Kiran: Hello maga
Ravi : hey kiran , heLo maga.. bega manege baaro ibbru oTTige noDoNa rakshu-naaa
Kiran : Lo.. naanu nim mane baaglalle ninthideeni.. Calling bell maaDadre nim akka bandu baaglu thegedbiTTu mukhad thumba ugithaaLe. Jollu surasbekaagiro TIME-alli Jollalle Abhishekaaa aagodu beDa anta ninge phone maaDde.. Metthage bandu baaglu open maaDolo. aagle 5 mins miss aagide.
Ravi : Haan sari..
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(opens the door.. Kiran gets in..)
Kiran : Lo maga.. ivattu yaav baTTe haakoNDidaaLo nam Rakshu
Ravi : Maga ivattu Rakshu Red Hot. alli noDo aa dress-alli hege yoga maaDthidaaLe.. wow. ssss. haa!
(Ibbru Enjoy maaDthaare.. Program mugiyatthe)
Kiran : Haan super program alwa maga. Toiletge hogbartheeni
Ravi : Lo thaDiyo yeddaaglinda naanu thaDkonDu koothideeni illi.. neenu bekaadre FirstFloor-alli iro Rest Roomalli Settle aagu.
Kiran: (Runs to first floor… alle Rashmi baTTe IRON maaDthirthaaLe..)
Rashmi: Ley Ley iroo yaak hange oDthideeya. Yavaaga bande neenu ? :O
Kiran : Hi Rashmi.. Naanu eegthaane barthideeni kaNe.. Sathyavaaglu naanu Rakshu program noDokke barle illaaapa… Promise.. Eega swalpa biDu.. Urgent aagide, TOILET kaali ide.. thaDkoLLoke aagthilla.. FLUSH out maaDbeku..
Rashmi : Ninge idannella nim manele mugiskonDu barakke aagalweno. Shudda tharle. Yen friendso nam Ravi-ge.
(Kiran runs inside and locks the restroom.. after 3 mins aache barthaane.. he gets down the stairs back to ground floor. he sees that Rashmi is scolding Ravi.)
Rashmi: Neenu obba Software engineeru. hinge LOCALaagi aaDoda. Swalpa sense iDo maaDo kelsadalli. Sumne ee kathe kavana bariyodu, stars meet maaDtheeni anta hogodu yella biTbiDu. ideenu hucchuthana nindu. kelsada mele gamana koDu innu swalpa.
Ravi : Aaythaaythu. Shuru aadre nillalla nindu.
Kiran : Akka.. Wait a min. Nam Ravi multi-talentedu. He can do all this things together. and ivattu naavu Rakshu, the heart-throb star of karnataka-na meet maaDakke hogthideevi. Shooting spot-na yeneno maaDi kanDu hiDidideevi naavu. Bangalore Interntational Airport antha. So we are going there.
Rashmi: Thale gile keTTideeya nimgella ? haan? you are going to drive 40 kms to see that actress is it? Agreed she is good looking and all that… So what difference does it make for you? neev avaLanna noDadre, avaLu ondu Hi heLbahudu. ondu autograph koDbahudu? yen sigatthe nimge adakkinta? yaake arthaane maaDkoLLolwo neevu. Sumne Petrol Wasteu. Nim software company yenaadru allowance koDattha idakkunu?
Ravi : Akka .. listen listen.. naavu swalpa famous aagbeku andre heegella irbeku.. ningella idu artha aagalla. sumne GAP CHUP. naanu snaanakke hogtheeni.. Heege yenaadru hodre naanu spotge, nan vaasinege, yoga maaDo Rakshu-ge Roga banbiDatthe.
Rashmi : ayyo paapa.. avaLeno nin jothe DATING barohaage mathaaDtheeyallaapa.
Ravi : ssss. haa! sumne aase huTTisbeDa akkaaa neenu.. heehee.. Sari eega disturb maadbeDa .. hoRaDbeku.. ivattu naanu CAR thogonDu hogtheeni. Neenu yelladru hogbekaadru 2 wheeler thogonDu naDi
Rashmi : sadhya 2 wheeler aadru uLisadyalla nange. aa rakshuna noDokke ivanu CARalle bere hogbeka. paramaathma!
last dilogue is superb…parvathamma…..
lol .. parvathamma alwoo.. paramaathma
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lol…..
dialogues are good abhi…
thanks
hahahaah…
mastaagide maga… continue continue…
Yako ninde story ansta edee
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Good job continue continue ..
hey super comments
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thanks a lot..
@Zatan.. nan story alla maga
heheeeheehe.. rani neenadre, rashmi yaaru…
mast…
sorry its ravi..
whoz life story is that ? yarappa morning yoga program watchinguuuu ?
nice story maga…keep going…
@ Rekha.. naanalwe Ravi.. naanu bari abhishek

@ Vinay… Kathe maga.. not life story
and thanks Sharath
Super… slow aagi start aagide… waiting for update…
sakath agidhe
No words to explain how nice antha
nice to read..! interesting..
ಹ್ಹ..ಹ್ಹ…ಹ್ಹ ಚೆನ್ನಾಗಿದೆ! ಕನ್ನಡದಲ್ಲಿ ಬರೆಯಲು ಟ್ರೈ ಮಾಡಿ
nice story..tumba chennagi bardidira….
hey maga, super idyo openingu…
but avr ibru programme nodidh mele 3min toiletge yaak hogthaaare? can you explain ??
lo vatsa.. refer to vatsaayana’s kaamasutra for the answer
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Nice one kano Abhi
Good start in Episode 1
en maga personal exp….
sakatagi bardidya bidu
Hahaha sakathagidhee
[Kiran : Lo.. naanu nim mane baaglalle ninthideeni.. Calling bell maaDadre nim akka bandu baaglu thegedbiTTu mukhad thumba ugithaaLe. Jollu surasbekaagiro TIME-alli Jollalle Abhishekaaa aagodu beDa anta ninge phone maaDde.. Metthage bandu baaglu open maaDolo. aagle 5 mins miss aagide ]
[Kiran : Hi Rashmi.. Naanu eegthaane barthideeni kaNe.. Sathyavaaglu naanu Rakshu program noDokke barle illaaapa… Promise.. Eega swalpa biDu.. Urgent aagide, TOILET kaali ide.. thaDkoLLoke aagthilla.. FLUSH out maaDbeku..] SUPerrrrrrrrrrrr maga KEeP uR cREtivITY LyK tHiS Our ENcOuRgEMeNt WiLl b thErE FoR You LOL cheErS [:D]
Maga super kano…
Nice one..!!!
Thanks all
Dialogues are pretty gud………!
So, ibru jollu antha artha aithu……
thanks lakshmi
and vasuki.. yes.. swalpa Jollu..initially swalpa Light comedy irli anta heegella
Wow Super Agi Idhe Story
chindi maga..
next yeanu aguthe..
Super aagidhe!
Nice Dilouges Abhi Rock on
interesting!!!! …will continue
its very neat i liked the intial take over of the script good work all the best and god bless u
Thanks a lot ! this means a lot to me ! thanks again
nice one
paapa.. akkange ee ibru seri kodthiro kaata nodokkaagthilla.. and ee akkanoo.. bai muchthaane illa:)
wow superb abhi….