Episode 1

SCENE 1 :

SUN RISES.. ITS MORNING.. ondu stylish good HOUSE.. adralli TOP floor-alli, someone sleeping still with RUG on his face!

Ravi already EAST-alli RISE aagbiTTidda.. But nam RAVI innu BEDalli becchage gorke hoDithidda. Sudden-aagi Alarm hoDkoLLoke Shuru aaythu. It was 7am.

Ravi (BED-alli malkoNde..) aaaaay.. thu. Yaav kantri nan maga ee Alarm iTTiddu ee TIMEge. (anta OFF maaDthaane.)
Pakkadalle ninthidlu avana akka Rashmi: Ley.. Neene kaNo.. nenne raathri set maaDadyallo.

Ravi: aah! houdalwaaaa.. (mayyi muritaa yedda). Naanu 7amge alarm yaake iTTidde antaane jnaapka bartillwalle.

Rashmi: Ivattu Sunday kaNo ley. Nin favourite programgaLu saalu saalaagi 7am-inda TVli barathalla noDhogu.

Ravi : Oh shit.. ya ya.. (he runs to the living room)

Rashmi : Ravi hallujjo, coffee koDtheeni

Ravi : Ley nan favourite star Rakshu ivattu Yoga program naDeskoDthaaLe kaNe. adanna PRIVATEaagi noDi mugisadmele bartheeni. eega coffee-ge yenu urgentu dear sister….  bande iru…

Rashmi : ayyo shuruvaaythu. aa dummi yoga maaDadre ivangenu majaanopa.. ee huDagranna arthaane maadkoLLoke aagalla.

Ravi starts watching Rakshu on TV doing yoga. Full enjoy maaDthirthaane. Madhyadalle phone baratthe.

Kiran: Hello maga

Ravi : hey kiran , heLo maga.. bega manege baaro ibbru oTTige noDoNa rakshu-naaa

Kiran : Lo.. naanu nim mane baaglalle ninthideeni.. Calling bell maaDadre nim akka bandu baaglu thegedbiTTu mukhad thumba ugithaaLe. Jollu surasbekaagiro TIME-alli Jollalle Abhishekaaa aagodu beDa anta ninge phone maaDde.. Metthage bandu baaglu open maaDolo. aagle 5 mins miss aagide.

Ravi : Haan sari.. :D !

(opens the door.. Kiran gets in..)
Kiran : Lo maga.. ivattu yaav baTTe haakoNDidaaLo nam Rakshu

Ravi : Maga ivattu Rakshu Red Hot. alli noDo aa dress-alli hege yoga maaDthidaaLe.. wow. ssss. haa!

(Ibbru Enjoy maaDthaare.. Program mugiyatthe)

Kiran : Haan super program alwa maga. Toiletge hogbartheeni

Ravi : Lo thaDiyo yeddaaglinda naanu thaDkonDu koothideeni illi.. neenu bekaadre FirstFloor-alli iro Rest Roomalli Settle aagu.

Kiran: (Runs to first floor… alle Rashmi baTTe IRON maaDthirthaaLe..)

Rashmi: Ley Ley iroo yaak hange oDthideeya. Yavaaga bande neenu ? :O

Kiran : Hi Rashmi.. Naanu eegthaane barthideeni kaNe.. Sathyavaaglu naanu Rakshu program noDokke barle illaaapa… Promise.. Eega swalpa biDu.. Urgent aagide, TOILET kaali ide.. thaDkoLLoke aagthilla.. FLUSH out maaDbeku..

Rashmi : Ninge idannella nim manele mugiskonDu barakke aagalweno. Shudda tharle. Yen friendso nam Ravi-ge.

(Kiran runs inside and locks the restroom.. after 3 mins aache barthaane.. he gets down the stairs back to ground floor. he sees that Rashmi is scolding Ravi.)

Rashmi: Neenu obba Software engineeru. hinge LOCALaagi aaDoda. Swalpa sense iDo maaDo kelsadalli. Sumne ee kathe kavana bariyodu, stars meet maaDtheeni anta hogodu yella biTbiDu. ideenu hucchuthana nindu. kelsada mele gamana koDu innu swalpa.

Ravi : Aaythaaythu. Shuru aadre nillalla nindu.

Kiran : Akka.. Wait a min. Nam Ravi multi-talentedu. He can do all this things together.  and ivattu naavu Rakshu, the heart-throb star of karnataka-na meet maaDakke hogthideevi. Shooting spot-na yeneno maaDi kanDu hiDidideevi naavu. Bangalore Interntational Airport antha. So we are going there.

Rashmi: Thale gile keTTideeya nimgella ? haan? you are going to drive 40 kms to see that actress is it? Agreed she is good looking and all that… So what difference does it make for you? neev avaLanna noDadre, avaLu ondu Hi heLbahudu. ondu autograph koDbahudu? yen sigatthe nimge adakkinta? yaake arthaane maaDkoLLolwo neevu. Sumne Petrol Wasteu. Nim software company yenaadru allowance koDattha idakkunu?

Ravi : Akka .. listen listen.. naavu swalpa famous aagbeku andre heegella irbeku.. ningella idu artha aagalla. sumne GAP CHUP. naanu snaanakke hogtheeni.. Heege yenaadru hodre naanu spotge, nan vaasinege, yoga maaDo Rakshu-ge Roga banbiDatthe.

Rashmi : ayyo paapa.. avaLeno nin jothe DATING barohaage mathaaDtheeyallaapa.

Ravi : ssss. haa! sumne aase huTTisbeDa akkaaa neenu.. heehee.. Sari eega disturb maadbeDa .. hoRaDbeku.. ivattu naanu CAR thogonDu hogtheeni. Neenu yelladru hogbekaadru 2 wheeler thogonDu naDi

Rashmi : sadhya 2 wheeler aadru uLisadyalla nange. aa rakshuna noDokke ivanu CARalle bere hogbeka. paramaathma!

43 Responses to “Episode 1”


  1. 1 sudi September 4, 2008 at 6:41 pm

    last dilogue is superb…parvathamma…..

  2. 2 abhisheksn September 4, 2008 at 6:44 pm

    lol .. parvathamma alwoo.. paramaathma :P !

  3. 4 naveen k.h September 4, 2008 at 7:17 pm

    dialogues are good abhi…

  4. 6 Vijay September 4, 2008 at 9:00 pm

    hahahaah…

    mastaagide maga… continue continue…

  5. 7 Sripad (Zatan in Maja Madi) September 4, 2008 at 10:11 pm

    Yako ninde story ansta edee :) )

    Good job continue continue ..

  6. 8 abhisheksn September 5, 2008 at 1:10 am

    hey super comments
    thanks a lot..
    @Zatan.. nan story alla maga :P !

  7. 9 rekha September 5, 2008 at 2:22 am

    heheeeheehe.. rani neenadre, rashmi yaaru…
    mast…

  8. 10 rekha September 5, 2008 at 2:23 am

    sorry its ravi..

  9. 11 VINAY September 5, 2008 at 4:55 am

    whoz life story is that ? yarappa morning yoga program watchinguuuu ? :)

  10. 12 Sharath September 5, 2008 at 6:34 am

    nice story maga…keep going…

  11. 13 abhisheksn September 5, 2008 at 8:10 am

    @ Rekha.. naanalwe Ravi.. naanu bari abhishek :D
    @ Vinay… Kathe maga.. not life story :P
    and thanks Sharath

  12. 14 Shrikrishna September 5, 2008 at 9:26 am

    Super… slow aagi start aagide… waiting for update… :)

  13. 15 champu September 5, 2008 at 2:40 pm

    sakath agidhe
    No words to explain how nice antha

  14. 16 Rashmi September 5, 2008 at 4:55 pm

    nice to read..! interesting.. :)

  15. 17 nilgiri September 6, 2008 at 6:05 am

    ಹ್ಹ..ಹ್ಹ…ಹ್ಹ ಚೆನ್ನಾಗಿದೆ! ಕನ್ನಡದಲ್ಲಿ ಬರೆಯಲು ಟ್ರೈ ಮಾಡಿ :)

  16. 18 Lakshmi September 9, 2008 at 7:57 am

    nice story..tumba chennagi bardidira….

  17. 19 vatsayana September 9, 2008 at 1:20 pm

    hey maga, super idyo openingu…
    but avr ibru programme nodidh mele 3min toiletge yaak hogthaaare? can you explain ?? :-P

  18. 20 abhisheksn September 9, 2008 at 1:31 pm

    lo vatsa.. refer to vatsaayana’s kaamasutra for the answer :D !

  19. 23 sathish September 10, 2008 at 10:48 am

    en maga personal exp…. :P
    sakatagi bardidya bidu :)

  20. 24 Nagendra Bhardwaj September 14, 2008 at 11:53 am

    Hahaha sakathagidhee

  21. 25 Badreesh September 17, 2008 at 7:03 pm

    [Kiran : Lo.. naanu nim mane baaglalle ninthideeni.. Calling bell maaDadre nim akka bandu baaglu thegedbiTTu mukhad thumba ugithaaLe. Jollu surasbekaagiro TIME-alli Jollalle Abhishekaaa aagodu beDa anta ninge phone maaDde.. Metthage bandu baaglu open maaDolo. aagle 5 mins miss aagide ]
    [Kiran : Hi Rashmi.. Naanu eegthaane barthideeni kaNe.. Sathyavaaglu naanu Rakshu program noDokke barle illaaapa… Promise.. Eega swalpa biDu.. Urgent aagide, TOILET kaali ide.. thaDkoLLoke aagthilla.. FLUSH out maaDbeku..] SUPerrrrrrrrrrrr maga KEeP uR cREtivITY LyK tHiS Our ENcOuRgEMeNt WiLl b thErE FoR You LOL cheErS [:D]

  22. 26 Naveen gowda September 17, 2008 at 8:18 pm

    Maga super kano…

  23. 29 lakshmi December 22, 2008 at 12:40 pm

    Dialogues are pretty gud………!

  24. 30 vasuki December 23, 2008 at 7:08 pm

    So, ibru jollu antha artha aithu…… :)

  25. 31 snabhi December 24, 2008 at 10:42 am

    thanks lakshmi
    and vasuki.. yes.. swalpa Jollu..initially swalpa Light comedy irli anta heegella

  26. 32 siddu December 31, 2008 at 3:08 pm

    Wow Super Agi Idhe Story

  27. 33 makkirot January 7, 2009 at 8:26 am

    chindi maga..

  28. 34 makkirot January 7, 2009 at 8:31 am

    next yeanu aguthe..

  29. 35 Pallavi January 9, 2009 at 12:12 pm

    Super aagidhe!

  30. 36 Shreyas January 11, 2009 at 10:10 pm

    Nice Dilouges Abhi Rock on

  31. 37 Avinav January 19, 2009 at 12:38 pm

    interesting!!!! …will continue

  32. 38 AddhiLokkesh March 5, 2009 at 7:51 pm

    its very neat i liked the intial take over of the script good work all the best and god bless u

  33. 41 bhavana May 10, 2009 at 1:02 am

    paapa.. akkange ee ibru seri kodthiro kaata nodokkaagthilla.. and ee akkanoo.. bai muchthaane illa:)

  34. 42 mamtha October 22, 2009 at 1:32 pm

    wow superb abhi….


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