Episode 5

Ravi and Kiran riding back home on their bike…

Kiran: Yeno maga lee.. Aa watchman nange maathra HINDIli bayydu oDisbiTTa, ninge maathra kannada-li mathaaDisda? Mostly avange gotthaagoytho yeno, naanu HINDI and ENGLISHalli weaku antha.

Ravi: Tension aagbeda kano. Ee nan makkLige yella bhaashe baratthe. avan mukha noDadre gotthagalwa avnu kannada-davanu anta. But ee GOORKHA yellaru hindi-li mathaaDthaaralla.. adakke paapa ivandunu LEVELu. yella Software engineersu ENGLISHalli maathaaDi level thorasthaaralla haage. HINDIli mathaaDi ninna doora oDisakke try maaDda. Avan kelsa avanu sariyaage maaDida biDu. But later, avanige naanu hogi confuse maaDadnalla, avaaga avana MOTHER TONGUE aache banthu .. ishTe idar rahasya!

Kiran: Lo, ee story-ge neene HEROkaNo.. yen LOGICoo maga.
Ravi : Nangyaako doubtu.. Swalpa hinde koothko neenu! Neenu heroine aaglilla andre saaku.. lo. heLilwaa.. keLsalwaa? swalpa hinde koothko BIKEalli.. adyaake ashTondu TOUCH maaDthideeya nanna..

Kiran: oh sari sari. Rakshu noDkonDu bandooru Rammuna maretharu anno gaade haage, nanne marithideeyalla neenu ! Nananne registheeya neenu ? huh

Ravi : Lo.. aaythu baarappa… yaavdyaavdakko yaavdyaavdo gaade heLkonDu LEVEL kammi maaDkobeDa neenu!

Kiran: Ravi, mundhe yen maaDtheeya?

Ravi: innenu, dinaanu one hour illi bandu Rakshuna noDkonDu hogtheeni naanu !

Kiran: Oh dinaanu neenu WALL yegaro program iTTideeya ?

Ravi : innenu aakashadinda DIRECTaagi BEDROOMge dhumukla? eega muchkonDu baa.. STORY deviate maaDbeDa! GAP CHUP..

Ravi started doing the same thing everyday from then on. He used to climb the wall and attack SUNNY and then watch for Rakshu from outside. After around 2 weeks, He knew her complete schedule, dialy routines. It used to be like this back home.

Ravi : oh akka, yenu 6pm aaytha, eega Rakshu manelidre thinDi thintirthaaLe. Fruits and Fruit juice 1 glass.

oh eega 7am, eega rakshu gymming maaDthirthaaLe 8amvaregu, eega adanna noDoke hogbeku naanu.

etc etc!

One day outside Rakshu’s room,

Ravi: ooh.. bega baare room-ge bedroomge … kaadiruve naa ninagaagi na Window SEATalli… baare baare…

Rakshu (inside her room, enters the room): hey lakkamma, neenu manege hogu eega. Naanu obbLe irbeeku eega. aaytha. Bega horaDu.
Lakkamma: aaythu ammore.

Ravi: Oh :O . Ideenappa idu ! Shambulinga mahaathme…. maneli iddiddu ondu lakkamma.. aaa aTTilakkammaana aachege aTTbiTTu araamaage obLe yen sketch hakthaaLo noDle beku. Ekaanthavaagiddaaga, naanu oLage hogbiDlaaa ?? hmm beDa beDa.. aamele kera thagoNDu hoDedu, watchman kayyalli DUM annisbiDthaaLe. ille ninthkonDu Scene noDoNa..

(OLage Rakshu has opened her laptop and has started chatting. She is smiling and chatting continiously on her laptop).

Ravi: Oh … Naanu yenaadru maaDi ivaLa email ID catch haakonDu chat maaDbeku ivaL jothe. araamaagi kaaL haakakke yedurige ninthre METERee oDalla annatthe. CHATTING maaDokke METERee beDwalla!

(suddenly he sees a young guy parking his car in front of her house. He runs and enters the house and rings the bell. Rakshu shouts, “Come in.. Its open”. He gets in and comes into her room )

Ravi: Ivanyaavonappa 12th MANu. Eega LATE entry koDthidaane. IvaLu bere yaaru antaanu noDde COME IN anbiTlallaa. NAanu next time ide thara obbLe iddaaga BELL maaDbeku. Nangu COME IN andru anbahudeno. hmm. noDoNa ee 12th MAN yaake entry koTTa ee timealli antha.!!….

(he sees that the guy closes all the windows of her room as he comes.)

Ravi: Shit. kaL nan maga.. window yaake close maaDda? Scene yella close. ishTakku ivanu window yaake close maaDdaa? haan!? Yen secret naDiyatto oLage. Hmm mostly ivanu PRODUCER irbeku. duDDu koDokke bandirbeku secret-aagi!

(suddenly he listens to mischievous voices from inside)

female: Chi.. yeno neenu. sss.. hhaaa!

male : kalli.. neenu idakke kaaythaa iddiddu anta nange gottu. Naachke yaake eega.. ?

etc etc

Ravi gets upset :( ! : Che ivaLu heega? ee huDuga yaaro yeno. ivan jothe ivaLu yaake heege aaDthidaaLe. ivaLanna cinema-li SATI SAVITHRI thara noDi noDi naanu ivaLu haage ankonDidde. eega gotthaaythu Real life Shakeela ivaLu anta. Thu yappa! Ille iddre AIDS-geeds banbiDatthe… biTToDbeku.

He goes back from there. From that day he almost decreases the frequency of visiting Rakshu’s house. It would be once in a week or something whenever he sees her video on TV and when he wants to see her badly only. He would not tell anything about whatever had happened to anyone including Kiran.

Kiran: Hey maga. NoDo illi Rakshu bombaat haaDu barthide TVli

Ravi : irli biDo. Naanu noDilde iro haaDenalwalla. hmm

Kiran: ivanyaake hingaagodaa ? hmm

Ravi’s reaction would be a bit of reluctant kind of reaction,  for things related to Rakshu. Though Rashmi and Kiran notice it , they wont comment on it.

One day Ravi reads a news on newspaper that “Rakshu leaves to london for 30 day shooting”. So he would stop going to her place for 30 days from that time. In the meantime he misses her so much due to the long gap. On the 31st day he thinks,

Ravi: Naanu ivattu Rakshu manege hoglebeku. May be she has arrived back today to bangalore. I have missed her for quite a lot of time now.

So he makes up his mind and goes near Rakshu’s house……..

MUNDAYTHEEEEEEE  MAJA.. noDi Episode 6….

16 Responses to “Episode 5”


  1. 1 Champu September 17, 2008 at 3:29 pm

    Chenagidhe anna, Sakath senti one paapa nam ravi :(
    Waiting for the next episode

  2. 2 Chetan September 17, 2008 at 4:38 pm

    not so happening abhi…. i feel its getting bad …. sorry to say :(

  3. 3 abhisheksn September 17, 2008 at 5:44 pm

    ya paapa ravige bejaaru aaythu anta
    ningu bejaaraaytha!! :D

  4. 4 Riyaz September 17, 2008 at 7:28 pm

    hmm now story is taking its shape and getting interest
    now let me see how you makes turns in story
    eagarly waiting for next episode

  5. 5 Vijay September 18, 2008 at 9:11 am

    Londongu hogtaanu praje atava innyaaradru Heroine hinde beeltaana [:D]

  6. 6 snabhi September 18, 2008 at 10:34 am

    He doesnt go to LONDON dude!
    She is back from london on 31st day ! so he decides to go to her house

  7. 7 yashika September 18, 2008 at 3:03 pm

    Thumba chennagide episode. Ravi phajithi nodi nagu banthu kanri.

  8. 9 Rashmi September 22, 2008 at 12:46 pm

    hmm.. gud gud.. :)

  9. 11 lakshmi December 22, 2008 at 1:08 pm

    Dialouges ella tumba channagide, waiting for future episodes…..

  10. 12 makkirot January 7, 2009 at 9:08 am

    paapa ravi

  11. 13 pushpa January 9, 2009 at 3:44 pm

    interesting.. so sad for ravi..

  12. 14 Avinav January 19, 2009 at 3:10 pm

    sakkat interesting!!!

  13. 15 mamtha October 22, 2009 at 2:52 pm

    Dialouges ella sakkath agide…..
    but madhya ravi ge swalpa bejargide….
    good going munde enu agutte nodana……


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