Episode 13

Friends, Thanks for the wait, I was busy for around a month now, that i could not write this episode! Think that, it was the interval, for the movie you were watching in your mind, reading my dialogues in the play!

So, WELCOME BACK after the INTERMISSION!!!!!! Time for some more action… Let 13th episode , the post-interval episode, start off with a small progress … not so prominent!

Ravi, at his home… thinking about what and how to do the promised job, all alone.. Enters Kiran..
Kiran: Lo Ravi.. Yeno obbne full deep thoughtalli fix aagirohaagidya
Ravi : Hmm.. maaDbekalla maga.. Rakshu case solveu
Kiran: adhentha caseoo… avaL jothe maja maaDidavanige buddhi kalisoda??
Ravi : maga.. full josh-alli Rakshu mundhe dialogue biTbiTTe.. eega illi meter off aagide…! Silent-aagi nan kayylaagalla anta kayyetthidre, maryaade aadru uLidirodu.. ivaaga, yeneno kisitheeni anta underlined dialogues biTTu, whistles hoDiskonDu, eega maaDakkaagde hodre, hero inda COMEDIAN level-ge onde HOPalli iLibeekaagatthaalloooo maga!!! :x
Kiran : Dont worry maga… nin kayyalli yenaaguttho adanna maaDu, mundhe yenaaguttho noDoNa
Ravi : Andre,,, Neeenu kayyi joDsalva?!
Kiran : ofcourse maga.. ! Eega nin plan heLu keLoNa….
Ravi : Plan-gintha munche, hegaadru maaDi aa Rakshu Video-na ondu saarthi noDbeku! Avaagle correct plan haakakke aagodu!
Kiran : (full jollu)… ofcourse… aa video kathe keLdaaglinda raathri yella niddene barthilla.. aa video-li aa Rakshu beauty-na noDkonDu haaga mayymaribeku anta yochane maaDthidde.. But neenu sakkathaagi ugitheeya anta sumnidde. Eega neene heege heLthirovaaga, waaw noDoNa noDoNa.. ! but hege???
Ravi: THUUUUUUU nan magne.. Naanu adanna noDbeku andiddu jollu surisakkalla… This is a part of the plan !! Iam just hoping for something in that video.. If its true as I thought, we will be lucky!
Kiran : Ya Ya.. we will be very very lucky if she its full hardcore action with Harisha in nude! waaaah….. ssss!!!
Ravi: Lo Maga.. How dare you still talk to me like this.. Ninge bhayankara odhe beeLatthe.. But ivaaga naanu busy.. and hence, you are saved!
Kiran : Sorry Sorry…maga! Yeno.  sikkapaTTe aase paTbiTTideeni.. Neenu yaavdokkoo video noDbeku andyalla, aa video copyna nange please ondu Raathri-ge koTbiDu.. ninge puNya baratthe.. Promise yaargu thorsalla!!!
Ravi : Shivaneee..! Grrr.. Lemme think now!
Kiran : ok ok ok !
After few minutes….
Ravi : Maga.. hegaadru maaDi ee Harisha-na meet maaDbeku as strangers… and Today, Iam sure he will be in that producer’s meet party function! Aa party-ge naanu entry aadre saaku, mikkiddella naanu noDkotheeni!
Kiran : oh is it? Haagidre, Neenu entry aagakke invitation-na naanu arrange maaDtheeni!!

Evening is here.. Ravi locates Harisha in the small crowd.
He whispers something in Kiran’s ears!
Kiran approaches towards Drunk Harisha and starts hitting him, slapping him.. one after the other…
Harisha: Ayyyyyoooooo.. yappa… oooo… ouchhhh.. yaarayyaa neenu ?? ooo .. ouch.. ayyyyoooo
Ravi stops kiran..
Kiran: Yeey! Yaavono neenu… biDo.. nanna ivana madhya barbeDa odhegaL thintheeya magane…
Ravi (as if he doesnt know kiran, as if they dont know each other at all.. ): Harishaaa sikkapatte oLLeyavaru.. avara mele kayyi maaDtheeya? He is a true artist… !
Harisha : (fully frightened) Haan.. houdappa.. naanu bejaan oLLeyavanu.. biTbiDappa nanna.. yappa.. noythaa ide bejaanu!
Ravi : (to kiran) (as if he is also drunk) : BiDtheeyo illa chacchlooo…
Ravi hits Kiran left and right and Kiran runs away from there, as if he got frightened about Ravi’s beating skills!!
Harisha: (fully drunken style) : Thanks kaNamma..Nan life-na save maaDi, nan jeevanakke TWIST koTbiTideeyallaaama neenu!! wah!  nin hesrenu??
Ravi (as if he is also drunk, he also in a fully drunken style ): Oh.. ivella yaake biDi saar.. Nange nim make-up work andre thumba ishTa.. yen sakkathaagi kaaNo hange maaDtheera sir heroinesna…! noDadre haage yenaadru maaDbeku annsatthe nanganthu!!
Harisha : Ya Ya… eechege Rakshu’s private makeup man naane! Actually.. avaLa undergarments-inda hiDidu upper make-up varegu naane yella decide maaDodu avaLge..
Ravi : (drunken style again) : hee hee .. haa haa.. super sir.. ivella maaDtheera sir aa Rakshu-ge..
Harisha: (drunken)Hoon kaNappa.. by the way, thanks so much again.. avanyaaro mental nange hoDithiddaaga, you saved me!
Ravi (drunken):  that is okie biDi saar… Thumba bejaarallidde ivatthu, adakke full tight-aagbiTTideeni hahaha! anthadralli nimge hoDeyodanna noDdaaga thaDiyakke aaglilla… chaccbiTTe!
Harisha: Bejaaru yaake mari?? Yen thondre..
Ravi : (FULL REEL start!) saaaar.. naanondu SEX picturege hogidde.. naanu 2 hours theatre-alli koothu koothu saakaaythu, adara heroineu baTTene bicchlilla saar.. haagene bed mele kashTa paDodanna directoru ardha ganTe thorsidaane.. adanna noDkonDu bejaargoythu. Nan lucku, timeu.. yenunu sari illa saar…:( yaavdaadru Wild sex noDbeku anta aase aadaagella hingaagatthe! :(
Harisha (full drunk) : yeey.. noDo, nan hathra bejaanu sex picture videos ive.. actually naane act maaDirodu real life-alli! Ha Ha! ninge avella thorastheeni aaytha ? Bejaaru maaDkobeDa maga.. neenu nan close friend iddahaage…! Nange Neenu best friend thara.. So ninge nandellla videos thorastheeni.. Maja Maaduvanthee!
Ravi : Neeve act maaDadra?? ! Oh oh ohoo. sari… Yaavdaadru heroine sex picture idiya sir?
Harisha: Superstar heroines, Priya, Rammi, Rajani etc etc yellaanu idiyappa.. Nan phone-alle ide aa videos, let me show you..
Ravi : oh oh ! doDDa listu… But nan fav Rakshu ilve ilwalla.. AvaLdu ilwa ?
Harisha: Oh ya ya. ide ide.. Let me show you how i usually spend time with Rakshu on bed..

Ravi : Hoon sir.. adaadru thoorsi sir swalpa.. NoDi maja thagotheeni.. aa theatre-navaranthu mosa maaDbiTru yeneno posters aache anTisbiTTu.. oLage aa scenes yella irle illa :( .. Nange nimma phone video-ne gathi! thorsi.. adrallu Rakshu-du andre, already FULL RAISE aagideeni!

How was Ravi’s tactic to get things out from Harishaa, without him getting to know any clue? Will Ravi watch Rakshu’s sex tape? But for what? Will he be able to acheive what he wants??? Next episode is coming!

31 Responses to “Episode 13”


  1. 1 Vijay March 2, 2009 at 8:17 am

    Oh,…so final episodes are out…
    revealing the truth and facts,
    BTW, how come in the first meeting itself, that ‘Boli Maga’ :P Harisha, shows the sex tapes of high profile Actress to Ravi…?
    cos of Drunken state, he reveals those and shows to Ravi???

  2. 2 snabhi March 2, 2009 at 8:35 am

    Ya.. 1. drunken
    2. he thinks ravi saved his life… full friend anta bramhe :) !

  3. 3 Vijay March 2, 2009 at 8:44 am

    interesting…
    will wait for next episode…

  4. 4 GS March 2, 2009 at 8:44 am

    First time ishTondu close a? Swalpa over aaithu :) Anyways good start after intermission… Normal movies thara nidde barisbeDa :P

  5. 5 snabhi March 2, 2009 at 8:53 am

    illa illa.. maja maaDistheeni

  6. 6 Mahesh March 2, 2009 at 10:46 am

    Yes..even i felt the same like others….First meeting itself getting close wil vanish the curiosity created in earlier episodes.. I thonk we can imagine what wil happen next…i hope you will defenetly make some twist and agin back in action????

  7. 8 snabhi March 2, 2009 at 11:33 am

    first of all he was DRUNK !
    full tight! and then… He thought Ravi really saved his life!
    moreover, You need not be VERY CLOSE to show that video.. he used to show it everyone around!!

    and then , When harisha told ravi was his close friend, its just because he was FULL TIGHT !

  8. 9 shilpa March 2, 2009 at 11:47 am

    Still reading…. Anyway, commenting becoz I am happy that you wrote this episode now at least :)

    Keep going… Will comment after I read this episode also

  9. 10 Mahesh March 2, 2009 at 12:20 pm

    ….ello continuation screen nam kanmunde inda miss aithalva….May be becoz of the long gap felt like that…This happens in a story reading….becoz we will not feel the expressions fully…….

  10. 12 champu March 2, 2009 at 5:31 pm

    Nice agide anna. Innu jaasti twists n suspenses kodu :)

  11. 13 pavankuamr.v March 3, 2009 at 10:03 am

    Anthu inthu 13th episode banthu,but first meeting-nalle ashtu aatmiyathe bekagilla innu swalpa lateaagi video clips thorisali.

  12. 14 Kiran March 3, 2009 at 10:10 am

    Hmm good going… pul tym entertainment anyways expectin more :)

  13. 15 Karthik L bhat March 4, 2009 at 6:41 pm

    ha…Next episode full suspense

  14. 16 pushpa March 4, 2009 at 8:24 pm

    hmmm.. entry to the party is made so easely.. security tight ilva party alli.. dont delay in writting the episode.. full story will be out from mind.. so was it so easy to get the sex scene from harish.. was there no security to help boli maga harisha.. ha ha ha…

  15. 17 adon555 March 4, 2009 at 8:27 pm

    too gud maga…. as usual hats off 2 ur writing skill..:)

    but ee episode nalli stry line kadime idhe ansutthe…..
    may be innu swalpa further helbahuditthu {curiosity maga ;) }

    bere technique use madbekittu ‘Boli maga’ harisha na catch hakolloke…….. ths one is a bit old technique alva..??

    WAITING FOR NEXT EPISODE…….!!

  16. 18 snabhi March 4, 2009 at 8:32 pm

    old techniquege jana beeLodu :D !
    new techniques-ge audience/readers beeLodu !

  17. 19 shrikrishna March 4, 2009 at 11:39 pm

    :) nice… as usual endige suspense… olle movie thara hogtha ede… good going… plz do not stop in b/w… give proper ending… :) :) waiting for coming episodes…

  18. 20 Kiran Parvati March 5, 2009 at 12:44 am

    Good one after a long break … Kiran na jollu-party madbityalla maga … at least nan hesru avandu …. swalpa olle role kodu … BTW, explain the video-tape in details ;-) Curious about it :-) )

  19. 22 Sumanth March 6, 2009 at 4:34 pm

    Hey Abhi

    Story is good and interesting. Actually i started reading it only from 2 days back and i read all the episodes in 2 days.. But now i have to wait :( … good dialogues abhi…

  20. 24 prashanth March 14, 2009 at 10:37 pm

    interesting….
    last 3 episodes odilla will read after my internals abi….
    innu thunba twist idhe ansuthe storyliiii

  21. 25 shank March 15, 2009 at 1:22 am

    waiting for next episode

  22. 26 rekha March 31, 2009 at 2:36 pm

    Hahahaha Abhi, read all 13 together today!!!!
    mast idhe starting dialogs…
    from 11, full twist…
    even i am guessing story might be like this or like that…
    waiting waiting…
    bega barali nxt episode…
    n btw, very nice.. good going…..
    let it be the unexpected… as u always do…

  23. 27 Sumanth April 9, 2009 at 12:05 pm

    Hey Abhi

    nxt episode yavaga???.. Waiting for it :)

  24. 29 mamtha October 23, 2009 at 11:41 am

    hmmmm nice abhi……
    kiran ge swalpa comedy role kottiro agide…… :)
    kiran dialogues ella superb……
    keep writing….. babye


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